15/04/2009

Thinking Of You

I am thinking of you in my wakeful lonesomeness tonight.
If it is wrong to love, then my heart just wont let me be right.
Cause I’m so lost in you that I cant live without you holding me tight.
I'd give everything, anything to have just one more night with you, tonight.
I'd sell my soul just to feel your warm body next to mine,
Cause I can’t go on existing in the remembrance of our soulful tune.
I'd give myself, my everything for your love, just for a night.

Come to me when I am alone at the stroke of midnight

And let us escape, tugging at our heart-strings, like two besotted kites.

18 comments:

sawan said...

nice expression! such a deep feling is quite tough to express, but i guess u have done justice to ur words! u take care :)

Chanchal said...

That was FANTASTIC!

Worth putting up on screen plays and magazines and movies and theaters which are primarily based on that special night.

You are wonderful at striking figures of speech, Dyuti.

Stay well,
Manoshij

A Poetess said...

@sawan: thanks man..ur regular comments n visits make my day :)





@Ban:thanks for ur words of appreciation..but i didn't get that part about a" special night" u mentioned..mind explaining? i for one thing didn't have anything particular in mind wen i wrote it...very late at night as usual!
do reply though,u.

Chanchal said...

I'd sell my soul just to feel your warm body next to mine,
Cause I can’t go on existing in the remembrance of our soulful tune.
I'd give myself, my everything for your love, just for a night.
Come to me when I am alone at the stroke of midnight...

These lines give me the impression of that divine heavenly thing..I cannot be more clear.
May be I am getting Sidney Sheldon very deep, whose novels I have been reading for the past couple weeks, without pause...

Love
Ban

sawan said...

now thts such an honor :) u take care grl, u write good and i luv being here :)

Gautam Anand said...

nice way of putting thoughts which run sooo.. deep ..

In b/w I loved the comments u put on my poems.. u r welcome.. to do so on my latest..

A Poetess said...

@ban: i was rolling on the laughter at my idiocy on asking u the question i did ask. i can be that much of an idiot sumtimes :P

A Poetess said...

@sawan:thanks. honestly.

A Poetess said...

@gautam: i will ..and being a poet is more often not by chance than it is.

james oh said...

Full of deep expression and feeling - I love the style you write it. Your thought is well flow and meaningful.

The Girl From Cherry Blossom Street said...

Hello there...
Thanks for stopping by!
I too love that poem by Byron.

Just out our curiousity, who or what inspired you to write this "Thinking Of You"?

Take care.

A Poetess said...

well i was living alone in a new city and i missing someone very dear who has gone very far from me and it is beyond my power to reach out to him, so late at night when the loneliness was biting me, i just scribbled down my thoughts. some things in the poem are very personal..only me and him can understand...but i don't think he reads these lines.
thanks for a visit back.

The Girl From Cherry Blossom Street said...

Oh okay. That's very sweet.
It reminds me of a song I like...

NAMELESS FAMELESS said...

khub bhalo laglo pore

Chanchal said...

You have that wonderful nerve to term yourself an idiot, I am more than pleased...

More love
Ban

rimz said...

Very romatic . very nice expression of emotion n passion...

rimz said...

just a li'l ques,only if ya mind answering.
where frm u got ur blog template. its very nice ,creating a dreamy ambience. like it very much.
Ur blog is also very nice.

A Poetess said...

@rimz: thanks girl!
i don't mind answering your question at all...its just that I have completely forgotten where i have taken the template from..its been so long..sorry for such a disappointing answer.

keep coming back!!