tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14361167.post6383399042063457238..comments2023-09-07T15:46:12.371+05:30Comments on Emotions: The Pink LetterA Poetesshttp://www.blogger.com/profile/01478548647742079168noreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14361167.post-80275090435239110312009-01-29T22:31:00.000+05:302009-01-29T22:31:00.000+05:30Yes , I am the one.Would comnt to your post later....Yes , I am the one.<BR/>Would comnt to your post later....<BR/>Not much time thse days ..... <BR/><BR/>Tc ...<BR/><BR/>:)Indrajithttps://www.blogger.com/profile/01710168554066786859noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14361167.post-7029216794700844072009-01-10T22:40:00.000+05:302009-01-10T22:40:00.000+05:30i love these lines .. "Peeping into the past or th...i love these lines .. "Peeping into the past or the future is not my business <BR/>So I shut up and look at the present dizziness <BR/>As days and nights meaninglessly whizz past us... <BR/>I just stay numb and wish that the pink letter was mine. <BR/>But neither have you cared enough nor have I <BR/>It’s been a relationship of convenience from the very start "<BR/><BR/>wow ... absolutely wowNameless Famelesshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/07155882153694245301noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-14361167.post-56308432724550806402009-01-09T21:51:00.000+05:302009-01-09T21:51:00.000+05:30it seems to me u r not exploring your full potenti...it seems to me u r not exploring your full potentials in your poetry. dont limit yourself, no need to hold back. the attention, the focus of you poem is on rhyming...free it from that. go for stronger, more beautiful phrases, words, ideas...the charm should be in that. like there is in the way this poem ends. <BR/><BR/>strike with your lines. hit hard, even though it knocks you yourself out for a while. you'll become stronger.Anonymousnoreply@blogger.com